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Such a inspiration
I’m your biggest lie,
You can’t even look in my eyes,
Breathe
Just a little longer,
Breathe,
Just a little harder,
I can’t inspire you to love,
Or even plant the desire,
Just a faded image in your mind,
I wish you could see you have a place in mine.

Oh the things you can do,
The courage that flows through!
And if I were to take you as my muse,
Tell me what would choose?
Would you breathe just a little faster,
If I whispered away your fear?
Would you  breathe a little slower,
If I felt your heart race,
At the pace of desire..
Such things you inspire!

When there’s nothing my muse can’t do,
Where do I, mediocre, come to?
I need to stop
Breathing
So hard,
And living so fast,
All the good things will always pass me by,
If I never stop to breathe,
Inspire these lungs,
Show me, how to breathe a little slower,
By holding a bit closer,
Inspire me to do,
Painting my passion through you.
©2004-2010 ~TornPages
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:iconsoverine-tigerhawk:
Very lovely and yet...depressing in someways lol ^^; I guess today isn't helping. But I really do like this. Gerat work

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Well written

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The blues ain't nothing but a good woman on your mind
:iconsoverine-tigerhawk:
You know after reading it for the 4th or 5th time... that really does, remind me of my self. I never take the time to do anything for my self... the 2nd and the 3rd stanza really do remind me of my "friend" who's...leaving and how I feel. Wow...you really take the words out of my mouth sometimes when I need them most :aww: I've gotta hand it to you :hug:

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awwww thank you =)

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Another page Torn...:raincloud:
:iconbakuryuuha:
Wow...very nice. I really should write a little more, I've been slacking lately.

Oh...and in case I haven't said so already, it's Flareon from Nexus. Good to see you here ^.~
:iconsoverine-tigerhawk:
Any time ^^ I love your poems :aww:

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